Today's demo lesson was AMAZING.  It was so complete and so thoughtful.  Alexa shared a warm up that demonstrated the use of AAAWWWUUBBIS words to get the ball rolling, then had us participate in AAAWWWUUBBIS searches and scavenger hunts through mentor texts.  Finally, we paired up to work on writing a short story about monsters that gave us an opportunity to use AAAWWWUUBBIS.  I am going to use this idea like crazy.  It can be used to encourage students to write using prepositional phrases, adjective phrases, and noun phrases.  It can work with FANBOYS.  I just hope I don't over use it.  It can be adapted to so many things in the classroom.

I also enjoyed our sacred writing time since it allowed us to go back to a piece we had already written and do Express Lane edits.  What a fantastic tool.  This can also work as an AAAWWWUUBBIS follow up.  

We are all struggling a little this week and feeling overwhelmed since pretty much all of us are trying to still get through the reading.  Last week felt good because most of us had finished Lamott's book before the week began.  This week, many of us are reading Crafting Digital Writing and Mechanically Inclined in our spare time.  If there is one book I wish I had read before the SI, it would be Mechanically Inclined.   
 
Since the last log entry, I realized that I struggle to start things, I get going like crazy in the middle, then I have a very hard time finishing things.  Working in our writing groups has been very helpful...I wish they were around me all the time to give me guidance and feedback.  I thought I was almost finished with my This I Believe piece and my response to Bird by Bird, but I realized that they both needed a stronger finish.  We had already moved on to some other things, and now I am struggling to get back to those pieces to wrap them up.

On Friday we participated in the writer's marathon.  It was a fun experience, but, again, I struggled to get topics rolling and to stay focused throughout the day.  I wasn't committing myself to any of the pieces I started, and the words of Anne Lamott's father kept echoing in my mind: "Make a commitment to finishing things."  This is a struggle because I look at something and know how much more work it needs...and it intimidates me to the point that I just don't want to do it.

This problem of starting and committing myself to a writing piece continued during sacred writing time and the teaching demo today.  The sacred writing time used a text by Steven King to get students to pick out strong words and to discuss how this powerful language helped him expand detail.  Again, this is something I will definitely do with my students.  I loved the conversation we had about the model text.  But when it came time for me to choose my own moment to "explode," I was stuck again.  I just didn't want to write about something unpleasant, and I couldn't think about a good topic.  I never really did get to the point where I was writing something with powerful words and phrases.  For me, this would work very well if I were already working on a piece and I wanted to take one moment from that piece and draw it out and slow it down.  Yes.  For me, this would work well for revision.

I also love the Snapshot Poetry Lesson that we were introduced to today, and I have every intention of using this lesson in my classroom next fall.  I loved the collaborative work we did, and I was thrilled to join my ideas with the brilliant ideas of my group to create a poem about Linton Hall.  When it was time to work on our own poems, though, I was stuck.  I chose a picture and started writing down ideas, but it took a long time to find anything to work with in my own words.  I finally came to a place where I was cruising along a bit...and then we ran out of time.

Finally, the last big thing I did today was start my website to create my digital portfolio.  I really enjoyed and appreciated the time we were given to experiment with the information in Chapter 3 of Crafting Digital Writing.  I think I want to look into having my students create digital portfolios for their freshman year.  We'll see how that goes.

Now, the question is, will I make a commitment to finish these things?  Can I take the lessons and either apply it to something I already have started, or can I finish that poem that I started from my snapshot.  Will I finish this website I startedWe'll see.
 
This morning, when we re-read Bedhead looking for how the punctuation and conventions affected our reading, I was skeptical at first.  I didn’t really want to do it again.  Then I noticed and started writing down.  I was blown away at how challenging it was to try to use this punctuation as a model, but I loved it!  I love the potential ideas for what I could do with it in my classroom!  I love the beginning of the conversation about conventions that it will begin!  I did bring up a potential problem with grammar teaching in context versus grammar teaching from handbooks.  I got the answer I wanted. J

The visualization was another big moment for me.  I really loved the window assignment.  It brought me to so many beautiful memories, and it may have given me a way to talk about my memories of my dad.

I learned so much from my writing group today too.  With my group’s encouragement, I am eager to work further on a piece I thought I was done with.  My group’s thoughtful comments gave me several good ideas to work with.  

 
At first, I wasn’t really inspired to write much about the whole hair topic.  But then I remembered a particular hair catastrophe that my mom saved me from back in high school, and I was on a roll.  I did love the use of the children's book as model text, though.  I should have brought up the sensitivity around the issue of hair that African American students feel. 

I love the idea of using digital voice recorders in the classroom!  This is definitely on my to-do list.  I can already see what a valuable tool these will be for my students for revision.  I also think I want to try recording myself assessing their writing.  I actually think it might be kind of fun.  I am eager to review podcasting tools and techniques since it has been several years since I have done anything with it…and I really want to use this for the final draft of at least one of my students’ projects.

In our discussion of Bird by Bird, I realized that I wanted to bring the teacher back into my reflection that I had written. 

Finally, the webinar was helpful.  The best thing I got out of it was the wiki for the book.  I am definitely going to read the book while using the wiki to look at the tools he recommends.

 
Today was a little bit rough, actually.  I have been struggling with the whole how bad do I want to do this whole writing thing.  Lamott wrote a glorious book, but I am not Lamott writer right now.  Again and again the chimes went off in my mind of I get this and I get this…but it was also intimidating.  I have never even written fiction!  I was intimidated and worried that I hadn’t done enough to prepare myself.  I was tired, and I got lost on campus AGAIN!  
As usual, I am initially resistant to every writing topic.  But be positive!  Be open-minded!  I didn’t want to write about bullying and it just makes me sad to think about my own girls someday getting bullied, but I ended up finding a few good possible starts during the sacred writing time.  I really like the writer’s notebook and am eager to work with this and think about how I can use it in my classroom.  
I loved the activity with the Venn diagram and the Writing Next piece.  I need to look more into this and give it to my administrators…and think more about how a writing curriculum could work within that framework.  
Finally, when brainstorming topics for the This I Believe piece, I came to a great one and I am very excited about writing more on it.  I definitely plan on doing more with that piece.  Besides being fueled to write about the topic I’ve chosen, I am eager to do this with my students next fall.

From the Writing Next I want to know more about creating collaborative writing groups in my classroom so that students are better at revising their writing and giving constructive feedback.  Summarization, inquiry activities for writing also.